CaitE Baloney

Hey there Wolfy, I'm Cait and I liked where you are going with this. I am usually not into reading vampirish stories but your story kind of intrigued me. I ...

Hi there. My name is Cait and I thought that your prologue was quite good. It does everything that it is supposed to, tell the reader a story and have ...

Hey there, my name is Cait and I have the pleasure to review your story. Overall I thought that it was very good and the story itself is very captivating. ...

Ok that was awesome. I have to say I was a bit skeptical when I began reading it but you pulled me in right away. I liked the way that ...

I really enjoyed this chapter. I think that you leave off at a great point because I want to keep reading so badly. This is good that you keep us ...

Hey, I really enjoyed reading this. I love your idea but my only thing about it was it seems to be a bit rushed. We didn't really get a good ...

I really enjoyed reading that. Probably what caught me up in it was your diction which was different but I liked it. I also enjoyed the detail that you put ...

I have been trying a new method to picking out names which has been helping. First I describe the character and find out everything about them and than I give ...

Thank you guys so much. I will definitely be paying more attention to the characters and trying not to make them seem to cliched. I also agree how some of ...

Wow, I really enjoyed that. I hope that you continue because you have a great start here. Everyone else has commented and I don't have any nit-picks. So great job ...

Hey there Foxfire, my name is Cait, and I enjoyed reading your story for the most part. Like WD I felt that you did not give us enough insight into ...

Ok, so this is the first time that I have posted on here in a while. I hope that this turns into a novel (that is if I can keep ...

I really enjoyed reading this. I wasn't expecting it to be as good as it was seeing as there are so many Cinderella stories and many of them do not ...

I really like this story more and more as I read it. Nothing has sparked my interest like your story in a while for me. I like how you opened ...

Hey, It seems that everyone has already critiqued this but I would just like to say that I really enjoyed this. I think that the very end (when she rips ...